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Caroline was just a normal 16 year old teenager. She had a normal family. A normal set of friends and even a terribly normal school. But what happens when Caroline s life is turned up side down by a vampire? A vampire who will unintentionally help her discover her true fate. A fate that will carry Caroline into a world full of adventure and romance. Of cruelty and love.
Another big thanks to Kate price as she wrote this blurb as well.
Everyone go check out her books there amazing ^.^
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
When Josie moves to a new town and ends up a werewolf, will she and her friend join their dead fathers' pack and save it from a corrupt wolf? Or will they fall in love with a different pack?
Riley is not your average she-wolf, theirs alpha blood running in her veins. That makes her yearn for others death, to absorb there power. Her parents died, leaving a family friend (Silas) to teach her to ways of the world. Well now he's dead, what happens when his son takes over and she finds out he is her mate? Will the two alphas but heads? What happens when Riley's best friend starts showing interest in her all of a sudden? What will happen when she is the most wanted werewolf in North America? Will her friends turn there back on her, or stay loyal? Find out :)
My name is Natalia Knight, Nati for short. I'm diffrent from your average pretty teenage girl. I'm a werewolf, but not just any plain werewolf but tha alpha female. I live with my younger sister Melody, and my parents. There's a new kid at school, he's my mate, he's an Alpha too, but I won't let him steal my heart. Will I?
Caroline was just a normal 16 year old teenager. She had a normal family. A normal set of friends and even a terribly normal school. But what happens when Caroline s life is turned up side down by a vampire? A vampire who will unintentionally help her discover her true fate. A fate that will carry Caroline into a world full of adventure and romance. Of cruelty and love.
Another big thanks to Kate price as she wrote this blurb as well.
Everyone go check out her books there amazing ^.^
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
When Josie moves to a new town and ends up a werewolf, will she and her friend join their dead fathers' pack and save it from a corrupt wolf? Or will they fall in love with a different pack?
Riley is not your average she-wolf, theirs alpha blood running in her veins. That makes her yearn for others death, to absorb there power. Her parents died, leaving a family friend (Silas) to teach her to ways of the world. Well now he's dead, what happens when his son takes over and she finds out he is her mate? Will the two alphas but heads? What happens when Riley's best friend starts showing interest in her all of a sudden? What will happen when she is the most wanted werewolf in North America? Will her friends turn there back on her, or stay loyal? Find out :)
My name is Natalia Knight, Nati for short. I'm diffrent from your average pretty teenage girl. I'm a werewolf, but not just any plain werewolf but tha alpha female. I live with my younger sister Melody, and my parents. There's a new kid at school, he's my mate, he's an Alpha too, but I won't let him steal my heart. Will I?