Author's e-books - mates. Page - 3
Destiny starts school as the new girl. She is alone as an orphan with an unappealing woman she calls "mother".
Adrian just saved a mysterious girls life. He didn't know what to do,so he just walked away.
Will they meet again or will they stay strangers?
Caroline was just a normal 16 year old teenager. She had a normal family. A normal set of friends and even a terribly normal school. But what happens when Caroline s life is turned up side down by a vampire? A vampire who will unintentionally help her discover her true fate. A fate that will carry Caroline into a world full of adventure and romance. Of cruelty and love.
Another big thanks to Kate price as she wrote this blurb as well.
Everyone go check out her books there amazing ^.^
Abused an orphan adopted by the Phillips is beaten by them everyday reveals a secret about her lost past making her not who she thinks she is.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
Alex has been taken, can Michael find her before she has the baby or will he lose them both?
Joey is the MVP for the basketball team, but what happens when the new girl catches his attention. Is it fate, is it love? Find out how explosive love came be in this story that's a garantee to leave a smile on your face.
Elizabeth has always had bad luck, first her mom dies, her dad becomes abusive, and her boy-friend dumps her. Her only escape is through music class. But then the unexspected happens, she gets the lead female role in the school musical. Not only that but she has to sing with the hottest guy in school, Louis Harrison. Could her life get any more complicated?
Alice Delong,Crazy fun,exciting, loveable,sweet when wants to be and perverted,She's sent to a school called Levong High after moving out of the poor cheap house her mother,step-father and little brother use to live in,now she lives in a 1 story house covered in orange, purple, and green.Alice decided that today was gonna be the day she started Levong high.she finds two friends and one major crush who happens to be her mate, but the problem is he's annoyed by her every talk walk and move, and considers a more serious girl. Will they combine?( Please notify me If there is a glitch between the Title of the story and the cover itself)
Julia Andrews has always had a bad life,being raised by theifs and watching them kill innocent people for money and there possessions.
On her 16 birthday her parents try to kill her but some strange events happen and she finds out who and what she is...
flame,aqua,lily,aria.4 sister on the run from the government which had held them captive for 14 long years. now at 16 the girls to a new town in america where they stumble upon a pack of werewolf's.some even claim to be their mates.(may contain swear words and other inappropriate parts)
Destiny starts school as the new girl. She is alone as an orphan with an unappealing woman she calls "mother".
Adrian just saved a mysterious girls life. He didn't know what to do,so he just walked away.
Will they meet again or will they stay strangers?
Caroline was just a normal 16 year old teenager. She had a normal family. A normal set of friends and even a terribly normal school. But what happens when Caroline s life is turned up side down by a vampire? A vampire who will unintentionally help her discover her true fate. A fate that will carry Caroline into a world full of adventure and romance. Of cruelty and love.
Another big thanks to Kate price as she wrote this blurb as well.
Everyone go check out her books there amazing ^.^
Abused an orphan adopted by the Phillips is beaten by them everyday reveals a secret about her lost past making her not who she thinks she is.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
Alex has been taken, can Michael find her before she has the baby or will he lose them both?
Joey is the MVP for the basketball team, but what happens when the new girl catches his attention. Is it fate, is it love? Find out how explosive love came be in this story that's a garantee to leave a smile on your face.
Elizabeth has always had bad luck, first her mom dies, her dad becomes abusive, and her boy-friend dumps her. Her only escape is through music class. But then the unexspected happens, she gets the lead female role in the school musical. Not only that but she has to sing with the hottest guy in school, Louis Harrison. Could her life get any more complicated?
Alice Delong,Crazy fun,exciting, loveable,sweet when wants to be and perverted,She's sent to a school called Levong High after moving out of the poor cheap house her mother,step-father and little brother use to live in,now she lives in a 1 story house covered in orange, purple, and green.Alice decided that today was gonna be the day she started Levong high.she finds two friends and one major crush who happens to be her mate, but the problem is he's annoyed by her every talk walk and move, and considers a more serious girl. Will they combine?( Please notify me If there is a glitch between the Title of the story and the cover itself)
Julia Andrews has always had a bad life,being raised by theifs and watching them kill innocent people for money and there possessions.
On her 16 birthday her parents try to kill her but some strange events happen and she finds out who and what she is...
flame,aqua,lily,aria.4 sister on the run from the government which had held them captive for 14 long years. now at 16 the girls to a new town in america where they stumble upon a pack of werewolf's.some even claim to be their mates.(may contain swear words and other inappropriate parts)