well this book has a lot of twist and turns that you may or may not see coming. After you read this book you will know exactly why not to talk to strangers.
Samantha is a wolf with a hard life. She isn't any good at hunting even though she is a wolf and her wolf mate is someone she can't even stand being around. What's next on the list of problems for this wolf?
A small error in the normalcy of a nightly torture ends something irreplacable.
(THIS IS NOT FOR YOUNGER PERSONS.)
Bridgette is lost.Her mother died of cancer.She was forced to move to her dads somewhere she doesn't even know.She kinds comfort in a boy who uses her as a booty call.She doesn't tell anyone,not even her best friend Candice.She wants to be Dylyns girl but he has a girl friend.He keeps telling her when him and Courtney break up that's when he'll give her a chance.She waits and waits but nothing.Will she ever get the boy or just be his second choice.
Have you ever been somewhere that makes you forget all the worldly things in life? That humbles you and makes you a better person? Well I have. This place is called Pachalum, Guatemala. And it's my home away from home.
Ther is a girl name Katie she lives is on a farm she is the only one who can get arond a horse she i atash she dose not whant to go back horse love is true
We want to do something like:
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
This book is a diary of a misunderstood girl who changed herself based on events that followed her everyday life. It gives details of here steamy sex life, context of her personal thoughts and emotion in its rawest form!!
Honey is known as the good girl. Her sister Diamond is on top of the family hustle. Diamond teaches Honey the game. Honey decides that she is going to be on top of the family hustle which means war against Diamond. But that all changes when she meets the man of her dreams Kane.
well this book has a lot of twist and turns that you may or may not see coming. After you read this book you will know exactly why not to talk to strangers.
Samantha is a wolf with a hard life. She isn't any good at hunting even though she is a wolf and her wolf mate is someone she can't even stand being around. What's next on the list of problems for this wolf?
A small error in the normalcy of a nightly torture ends something irreplacable.
(THIS IS NOT FOR YOUNGER PERSONS.)
Bridgette is lost.Her mother died of cancer.She was forced to move to her dads somewhere she doesn't even know.She kinds comfort in a boy who uses her as a booty call.She doesn't tell anyone,not even her best friend Candice.She wants to be Dylyns girl but he has a girl friend.He keeps telling her when him and Courtney break up that's when he'll give her a chance.She waits and waits but nothing.Will she ever get the boy or just be his second choice.
Have you ever been somewhere that makes you forget all the worldly things in life? That humbles you and makes you a better person? Well I have. This place is called Pachalum, Guatemala. And it's my home away from home.
Ther is a girl name Katie she lives is on a farm she is the only one who can get arond a horse she i atash she dose not whant to go back horse love is true
We want to do something like:
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
This book is a diary of a misunderstood girl who changed herself based on events that followed her everyday life. It gives details of here steamy sex life, context of her personal thoughts and emotion in its rawest form!!
Honey is known as the good girl. Her sister Diamond is on top of the family hustle. Diamond teaches Honey the game. Honey decides that she is going to be on top of the family hustle which means war against Diamond. But that all changes when she meets the man of her dreams Kane.