CHILDREN SURRENDER by Crimson Rose (the reading list book .TXT) š
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Children Surrender
BEGINNING
If you ask me, loving is letting go; for good. But obviously some people āor rather most people- donāt agree with me. Because, when I expressed my love and let go, I was in more trouble than anyone would imagine.
Where I live, people are nice and polite. Our daily lives are what a city person would call āboringā, but to us itās justā¦ānormalā. You see, my little town Johnson County is in the suburbs of Colorado. We have such a perfect little townā¦
Perfect two story houses.
Perfect lawns.
Perfect neighbors.
And I, Guinevere, the not so perfect son of Mr. and Mrs. Hunter.
***
Who succeeds to come to school late on the very first day? I do.
I was on the front steps of Johnson County Private High School for Boys and Girls when the bell rang. Itās stupid for our school to have such a fancy name, after all, it is the only high school in Johnson County, thus the only private one or the only school any girl or boy could go to anyways.
It is my senior year this year and I never heard anyone address our school with its full name. Ever.
Whatever, as I said, the first bell of the year had rung, and I was late.
Not unexpected.
I didnāt know where my new locker was.
Not unexpected.
When I dashed into the science lab where my first lesson was, all seats were already taken.
Not unexpected.
Except one.
Where I sat.
Where I fell in love.
Unexpected.
***
āHi, Iām new.ā I had just sat on the vacant seat. I didnāt even look at who was gunna be sitting next to me, so I was struck with surprise when someone talked to me āHm...?ā was my only answer. There he was, the most beautiful human being my eyes had ever seen. And he wasā¦ āI said Iām new. My nameās Sumio.ā
āH-hey! Iām Guinevereā¦ā he smiled at me. My insides melted āAnd Iām not new!ā Then, he turned away. But I couldnāt. He was sitting there as a Greek God in a school uniform. Soon he realized I was literally staring at him. āUmā¦ Is something wrong?ā I panicked āWhat? Oh no, I was justā¦looking at yourā¦highlights!ā and I guess I really was. He had fine brown hair, with wine-red highlights. He was trying to tuck his hair behind his ear. He gave me another smile, but then he continued to focus on the lesson. He didnāt care a bit about me, and why should he? He was too perfect to. Perfectā¦
***
ENDING
āAhem, excuse me? I believe that is my seat?ā It was a āgirlā sitting next to Sumio āmy Sumio- where I shouldāve been sitting. I guess any other guy other than me would consider hot, but all I considered about her was āthiefā. Sumio answered āOh, hi Gwenā¦ I believe itās ok if you swap places with my friend Alicia here?ā I wanted to PUNCH Alicia. Pullherhairkickherasspokehereyescutoffherfingers. But I did non of these āfantasticā ideas. But instead, I just said āSureā¦ā and without hesitating I gushed out, and ran to the mens room. I didnāt know what I was supposed to do. I looked into the mirror. How dull I was, how ugly, how unvaluable. I wanted to scream. I wanted to cough my lungs out. So I tried. I screamed and screamed and screamed on the top of my lungs. No one came in. I doubt that anyone even heard me. I wanted them to hear me. I wanted them toā¦
***
Human beingsā¦ Donāt we just love to destroy delicacies of what mother nature gave us! We burn forests down, hunt animals to extinction. I guess itās in our nature. And maybe thatās the way its supposed to be. Thatās how I came up with the idea of walking home to find my dadsā - pardon me- Mr. Huntersā hunting gun.
I remember Mr. Hunter taking me along to one of his hunting trips. I was probably 8 or 9. But that was the last time he took me to any trip.
***
As I held the gun in my hands, I knew it was more than a toy. I was ready to destroy one of the wonders this world ever hosted. Sumio, HERE I COME!
As I entered the school building, I realized I had no idea where Sumio was, or which classroom. So I started off with the science lab. He wasnāt there. Other, meaningless faces were staring at me and the gun with horror. So before I moved onto the next class I shot each student one-by-one. As I shot each student, the more fright came to the faces of the remaining ones. And as I saw more of the fright in their faces, I enjoyed each kill even more and more. As I killed the last student, after putting off the teacher, I experienced the feeling of truly letting go. This was love. This was passion. This was Sumio.
I heard the commotion in the hall before I saw it. It smelled good. It smelled like panic. It smelled like victory. Everyone was running out to the main entrance. I shouldāve used a silencerā¦ Atleast I hadnāt forgotten to bring a U LOCK along with me to lock all the doors before shooting anyone. They were trapped, and where ever he was, Sumio in this whole crowd, he was trapped too.
I was confused. A part of me was shouting āWhat the heck are you doing? You just murdered a classroom of people!ā while the other part was more likely whispering āIf you kill the older students first, the younger students will be freaked out to death which will give you more pleasureā¦ā I had already begun this business, so it was my duty to finish it. āI GIVE YOU TEN SECONDS TO RUN!ā I didnāt know what my point was but I surely was having lots of fun. People were running around like black spots on a broken TV screen. I grinned at the scene. Then, they went down. Bam. Bam. BAM!
And there he was, Sumio, freezing at his spot, praying that he wonāt be next. I ran at him, put the gun behind his neck, telling him to move it.
ALTERNATIVE END 1
Finally we got to the classroom where I slaughtered my first pray; the science lab. It was quiet in here.
***
Sometimes a little talk solves it all. Sometimes it doesnāt.
āSo Sumio, I guess Iāll be able to sit next to you till the end of eternity since Alicia is dead.ā His eyes went wide āAlicia?ā I gave a chuckle āYes! Yourā¦what is she, your girlfriend? Just a friend? Or is she just a girl? One of those girls that you lost count of?ā his eyes even went wider āPlease donāt kill me, but Iāve got no idea on who youāre talking aboutā¦ā I was ready to end his life. My finger felt like water on soap on the trigger. āI thought it was just gossip, but you ARE really crazy!ā
Then I remembered.
I remember what happened on that unforgettable hunting trip. I had nearly shot my dad, on purpose. They took me to a psychiatrist. I told them over and over again it was just an accident, but even I had trouble believing my own words. I remember the psychiatrist, Mr. Golan asking me āWhy did you want to shoot your dad? Do you know?ā of course I knew, so I told him āHe is not really my dad. He is an alien from outer space who plans on taking over me and my mother first, then Johnson County, then over the whole world! We are in grave danger! He can hear every word Iām saying right now! We must hide or heāll suck our brains!ā I had told him everything with the whole truth, but all he heard was āblah blah blah DELUSIONS blah blah blah HALLUCINATIONS blah blah blah IāM SCHIZOPHRENIC.ā
***
Sumio closed his eyes, regretting his last words. But I didnāt shoot him. Afterall he WAS right. I WAS crazy. There WAS no Alicia.
And worst of all, there WAS no damn reason for me to kill all those innocent people. There were 56 of them. All dead. What I was angry at, I donāt even remember. But it was too late. Too late to rewind things. So I left Sumio āalive- in the lab, to kill the remaining of the restless souls.
My idea was perfect.
I had come to this school, with the plan to kill Sumio - and Sumio only.
But in the end of the day, Sumio was going to be the only survivor.
As I killed the last student I still knew there was one person left to kill.
Myself.
I gave the gun to Sumio and asked him to pull the trigger on me.
So he did.
ALTERNATIVE END 2
As we moved to the science lab, I hadnāt realized someone was fallowing us. Finally I thought we were alone with Sumio. It was nice and quiet. The ideal place to kill my love. I asked him āSo, are you going to say you love me now?ā He knew he had to. But instead, a voice behind me replied āYes, yes I love you.ā It was one of the dumbass jocks who had bullied me. He continued āGuinevere, Iām so sorry. I know Iām one of those countless reasons why you wanted to kill all these people in the first place.ā Yes, he was. But I didnāt care about his sorry anymore. It was too late. And he was interrupting a perfect kill. āAll I want to say is, I kept teasing you because I was afraid.ā He was getting on my nerves āAFRAID OF WHAT!?ā I saw a tear slide down his cheek. Now I pointed the gun at him, and in the meanwhile Sumio hid behind a desk. āAfraid to love you. To discover that Iām actually gay. To be one of those people I make fun of. A fagā¦ā now I was crying too āBut the truth is, I do love you, and Iām sorry. So why donāt you put that gun down so we can make a new start?ā
An new start? That meant putting everything behind me.
The past, when I nearly shot my dad on that hunting trip.
The past, when I was diagnosed with schizophrenia.
The past, when I didnāt get enough love, from my parents, from any of my peers, from anyone.
The past, when I shouldāve gotten help.
The present, today, when I killed a bunch of innocent people.
Then I looked up at him. Him who was asking me with all his heart to begin with a blank page. āMy nameās Columbine.ā I put the gun on the floor and embraced my new startā¦
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