Author's e-books - high school. Page - 6
Quiet forests of Colorado. Michael Cole, ordinary soccer player and Senior fall sin love with Evelyn and is drawn into her heart and her mystical world...If Twilight and Lord of the Rings had a baby, this novel would be it.
While their friends in their quiet American suburb are getting excited about Sadie Hawkins and Prom, Zormna Clendar is tired of waiting for when she can return home. News of the rebellion back in the underground city on Mars where she grew up is beginning to see real danger and she wants to help. But Jeff Streigle (AKA Jafarr Zeldar) is holding her back for her safety as well as keeping her for the opportune moment. His plan is to finish high school under the noses of the ever watching FBI and keep out of view of the People's Military of Arras. However, their return home is long over due and the prophecy Zormna must fulfill is close.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
Nothing shocking here... it's been said and done before. My name is Kiara Graves and I am sixteen and pregnant, well... seventeen in a few days.
Life of Jake Sol
Parker has always been the popular girl in the school. She is part of the cheerleading team, she is in all these groups, and gets straight C’s, but none of this is what Parker wants. Its everything her mother wants. Parker’s mother puts her into a tutoring session for all her classes, because she also wants an all A student. Parker meets a boy named Robbie, and he cannot stand her what so ever. Parker soon starts to become aggravated because no one is seeing her for who she really is. They are seeing her for what everyone else is making her. When Parker, and Robbie start to open up to one another Parker realizes that Robbie is actually seeing Parker for her, but when Parker is finally breaking down Robbie’s wall’s he puts them back up, and shuts her out. she is determined to find out what is happening, but will she be able to handle the truth?
"High school is known as teenage hell, well dont you believe it?"
Elena is the typical high school junior who is trying to survive it all, a perfect angel she is, although she is dating a devil.
One small mistake can toss you into a night of blood and hate.
Would you dance with the devil?
Horror froze on her face. Afraid was what she was. She peered at her mirror again, fingers curled around the decorated edges of her wooden vanity, with confusion and in utter terror. Goosebumps formed along her pale and trembling arms. Startled, she looked once more. Her body, gone. Her face, gone. Alexis Beck? No longer. Now she is imageless.
Kelly Leblanc is a regular 17 year old girl who is your almost slightly average high schooler. That all got changed when she got to the office as a tour guide for Jason Bernard , one of the hottest vampires she's ever seen but does she know that yet? And what will her boyfriend Reed say or think when his girlfriend is falling for someone else? READ TO FIND OUT! (;
*Sorry I'm not the best with blurbs •~•*
One day, she's Saylor Remington, princess of Jackson High.
Now, she's That Girl. You know, the one everyone was talking about last fall? The one who's oh-so-private nude was posted all over the Internet? You know how they say a picture is worth a thousand words...?
Hers is only one: slut. She was-
A.) a virgin
B.) hopelessly in love
C.) kind of naïve
So, maybe Saylor wasn't all she was chalked up to be. Maybe she hadn't done ecstasy with Lucas Jones, notorious junkie. And maybe she hadn't hooked up with Greg DeMarco in the girls' bathroom. But that doesn't mean she's not a slut, right?
Wrong again.
When she meets Cutie No. Two, she thinks this is it. She's found 'The One', complete with foot-pop kissing, charming smile, and white horse. Perfect, right? Her racy picture seems thousands of years away, until it catches up with her.
That past trailing her and reality setting in, Saylor Remington begins to think about her life: from her friends, to her crushes, to maybe even her life once she gets away from her past and hometown.
Quiet forests of Colorado. Michael Cole, ordinary soccer player and Senior fall sin love with Evelyn and is drawn into her heart and her mystical world...If Twilight and Lord of the Rings had a baby, this novel would be it.
While their friends in their quiet American suburb are getting excited about Sadie Hawkins and Prom, Zormna Clendar is tired of waiting for when she can return home. News of the rebellion back in the underground city on Mars where she grew up is beginning to see real danger and she wants to help. But Jeff Streigle (AKA Jafarr Zeldar) is holding her back for her safety as well as keeping her for the opportune moment. His plan is to finish high school under the noses of the ever watching FBI and keep out of view of the People's Military of Arras. However, their return home is long over due and the prophecy Zormna must fulfill is close.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
Nothing shocking here... it's been said and done before. My name is Kiara Graves and I am sixteen and pregnant, well... seventeen in a few days.
Life of Jake Sol
Parker has always been the popular girl in the school. She is part of the cheerleading team, she is in all these groups, and gets straight C’s, but none of this is what Parker wants. Its everything her mother wants. Parker’s mother puts her into a tutoring session for all her classes, because she also wants an all A student. Parker meets a boy named Robbie, and he cannot stand her what so ever. Parker soon starts to become aggravated because no one is seeing her for who she really is. They are seeing her for what everyone else is making her. When Parker, and Robbie start to open up to one another Parker realizes that Robbie is actually seeing Parker for her, but when Parker is finally breaking down Robbie’s wall’s he puts them back up, and shuts her out. she is determined to find out what is happening, but will she be able to handle the truth?
"High school is known as teenage hell, well dont you believe it?"
Elena is the typical high school junior who is trying to survive it all, a perfect angel she is, although she is dating a devil.
One small mistake can toss you into a night of blood and hate.
Would you dance with the devil?
Horror froze on her face. Afraid was what she was. She peered at her mirror again, fingers curled around the decorated edges of her wooden vanity, with confusion and in utter terror. Goosebumps formed along her pale and trembling arms. Startled, she looked once more. Her body, gone. Her face, gone. Alexis Beck? No longer. Now she is imageless.
Kelly Leblanc is a regular 17 year old girl who is your almost slightly average high schooler. That all got changed when she got to the office as a tour guide for Jason Bernard , one of the hottest vampires she's ever seen but does she know that yet? And what will her boyfriend Reed say or think when his girlfriend is falling for someone else? READ TO FIND OUT! (;
*Sorry I'm not the best with blurbs •~•*
One day, she's Saylor Remington, princess of Jackson High.
Now, she's That Girl. You know, the one everyone was talking about last fall? The one who's oh-so-private nude was posted all over the Internet? You know how they say a picture is worth a thousand words...?
Hers is only one: slut. She was-
A.) a virgin
B.) hopelessly in love
C.) kind of naïve
So, maybe Saylor wasn't all she was chalked up to be. Maybe she hadn't done ecstasy with Lucas Jones, notorious junkie. And maybe she hadn't hooked up with Greg DeMarco in the girls' bathroom. But that doesn't mean she's not a slut, right?
Wrong again.
When she meets Cutie No. Two, she thinks this is it. She's found 'The One', complete with foot-pop kissing, charming smile, and white horse. Perfect, right? Her racy picture seems thousands of years away, until it catches up with her.
That past trailing her and reality setting in, Saylor Remington begins to think about her life: from her friends, to her crushes, to maybe even her life once she gets away from her past and hometown.