Author's e-books - love. Page - 123

Love is an act of endless forgiveness, a tender look which becomes a habit.
~Peter Ustinov

Ok guys, so this is my first book EVER! i´m open to comments, i know my writting skills my not be the best ones but please only constructive critisisim.

Once there happend to be the blue bird. A blue bird named Jason.

(once in a while i will add some poems)

Melanie and Ryder were so in love. But quickly find trouble with Ryder's dad. Will they ever find a way out of the craziness? Or are they stuck in it?

I am still working on it. Sorry

I'm new to this and I'm kinda stuck, so if you can read it and tell me what you should happen next that would be really helpful.

It's about a rich 20 year old that gets money from her parents. She met this hot guy who was in a gang and took all her money through the relationship she found out that she was being used and they both went to court to settle this....

I'm Scared and alone all by my self will it last for ever or get better!!?? No one cares and I stopped caring years ago will this pain last or will love find me!