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Mika and hilary are both seniors. They met the summer before their junior year. it was homecomeing week, the same week as their one year aniversery. they decide that its finally time to take their realationship to the next level. but what they didnt know was thats all it takes that one time...in the heat of the moment. join them as the struggle to figure out what tomorrow will bring them and how to be a teen parent.
Crystal & Diamond Heart are twins sister that go to a boarding school in Hawaii. But they night in Japan came back and hunt them. What is hunting them ?? will it hurt them are love them. Read and find out.
she has a been puched,kicked,thrown across rooms, but what happens when she moves in with her brother and all his friends fall for her, one friend a little harder then the others.
Abused an orphan adopted by the Phillips is beaten by them everyday reveals a secret about her lost past making her not who she thinks she is.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
This book is a diary of a misunderstood girl who changed herself based on events that followed her everyday life. It gives details of here steamy sex life, context of her personal thoughts and emotion in its rawest form!!
Sometimes a loved one comes into our lives for only a short time, then leaves us with a lifetime of beautiful memories. Along the way they touch the hearts of a lot of people who needed their special kind of love.
This book is not finished. PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT
Shaylen and Jasmine had been on the run for a while. There were so many people who had lied to both of them. Jasmine knew that Shaylen still had no idea about the supernatural world. There was nothing worse than making your best friends life hell. There was so much about the world that Shaylen still did not know and she were about to get a nasty wake up call.
elena the girl who was super hot, popular, had all the guys after her , caipton of the cheerleaders,grade A student. she has never feel in love until she meet ben.
ben the new guy in school super good looking,joined the football team,smart,nice and every girl had eyes on him but he only had eyes for elena.
I’m not the silly romantic person as you think. I don’t want the heavens or the shooting stars. I don’t want gemstones or gold. I have those things already. I want a steady hand. A kind soul. I want to fall asleep, and wake, knowing my heart is safe. I want to love, and be loved.
Mika and hilary are both seniors. They met the summer before their junior year. it was homecomeing week, the same week as their one year aniversery. they decide that its finally time to take their realationship to the next level. but what they didnt know was thats all it takes that one time...in the heat of the moment. join them as the struggle to figure out what tomorrow will bring them and how to be a teen parent.
Crystal & Diamond Heart are twins sister that go to a boarding school in Hawaii. But they night in Japan came back and hunt them. What is hunting them ?? will it hurt them are love them. Read and find out.
she has a been puched,kicked,thrown across rooms, but what happens when she moves in with her brother and all his friends fall for her, one friend a little harder then the others.
Abused an orphan adopted by the Phillips is beaten by them everyday reveals a secret about her lost past making her not who she thinks she is.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
This book is a diary of a misunderstood girl who changed herself based on events that followed her everyday life. It gives details of here steamy sex life, context of her personal thoughts and emotion in its rawest form!!
Sometimes a loved one comes into our lives for only a short time, then leaves us with a lifetime of beautiful memories. Along the way they touch the hearts of a lot of people who needed their special kind of love.
This book is not finished. PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT
Shaylen and Jasmine had been on the run for a while. There were so many people who had lied to both of them. Jasmine knew that Shaylen still had no idea about the supernatural world. There was nothing worse than making your best friends life hell. There was so much about the world that Shaylen still did not know and she were about to get a nasty wake up call.
elena the girl who was super hot, popular, had all the guys after her , caipton of the cheerleaders,grade A student. she has never feel in love until she meet ben.
ben the new guy in school super good looking,joined the football team,smart,nice and every girl had eyes on him but he only had eyes for elena.
I’m not the silly romantic person as you think. I don’t want the heavens or the shooting stars. I don’t want gemstones or gold. I have those things already. I want a steady hand. A kind soul. I want to fall asleep, and wake, knowing my heart is safe. I want to love, and be loved.