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Brooklyn Lawson always thought there was something wrong with her, she just never thought it would be something so big. The biggest decision she will ever have to make in her life. Heart break and disapointment will follow her through her final weeks. Follow her story as she battles life and death. Will she survive or will she die for chosing what her soul tells her?
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
If I have to, I have to. I don't have a choice. I'm obligated to fight the Archers and that's final.
My name is Danielle but everyone calls me Ellie. At first my life was the perfectly normal teenage girl life. But everything changed when I was in a car crash and all my friends and my parents died except for me and my best friend, Jason. Why did this have to happen? I'm a good person! I never deserved this. And now I have to live with fact that Jason is a werewolf and also my mark aka imprint. Nothing will ever be the same. My life is now a wild goose chase. I don't know how I'm even surviving. But hey, life does that to you and you have to deal with it. Life is all about changes right?
Brooklyn Lawson always thought there was something wrong with her, she just never thought it would be something so big. The biggest decision she will ever have to make in her life. Heart break and disapointment will follow her through her final weeks. Follow her story as she battles life and death. Will she survive or will she die for chosing what her soul tells her?
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
If I have to, I have to. I don't have a choice. I'm obligated to fight the Archers and that's final.
My name is Danielle but everyone calls me Ellie. At first my life was the perfectly normal teenage girl life. But everything changed when I was in a car crash and all my friends and my parents died except for me and my best friend, Jason. Why did this have to happen? I'm a good person! I never deserved this. And now I have to live with fact that Jason is a werewolf and also my mark aka imprint. Nothing will ever be the same. My life is now a wild goose chase. I don't know how I'm even surviving. But hey, life does that to you and you have to deal with it. Life is all about changes right?