(edited chapter 1, and added chapter 2.)This is my version of beauty and the beast, i think i'm going to try a few versions to see how they are, any advice you can give for improving it will really help:)
Summary: Belle and her friend Aeriana go into the woods behind her house. They don't get too far before they find a castle that Belle definitely knows wasn't there before. Or was it? Belle gets a telepathic message from whatever's in there, to get as far away as possible, but when Aeriana slips through the thick iron gate, there's no way around it...
Despite how little she knows about him, Belle grows fond of the beast and without realizing it a friendship and she thinks, and understanding.
Slowly I inhaled wincing at the sharp scent of the new girl as she walked in. Vampire. Laughing I watched as she wrinkled her nose herself. Handing her slip to the teacher she said something to him. "Mike? Will you take Amanda to her locker?" Sighing I pushed my self out of my seat. I walked over to her forcing a smile on my face.
(edited chapter 1, and added chapter 2.)This is my version of beauty and the beast, i think i'm going to try a few versions to see how they are, any advice you can give for improving it will really help:)
Summary: Belle and her friend Aeriana go into the woods behind her house. They don't get too far before they find a castle that Belle definitely knows wasn't there before. Or was it? Belle gets a telepathic message from whatever's in there, to get as far away as possible, but when Aeriana slips through the thick iron gate, there's no way around it...
Despite how little she knows about him, Belle grows fond of the beast and without realizing it a friendship and she thinks, and understanding.
Slowly I inhaled wincing at the sharp scent of the new girl as she walked in. Vampire. Laughing I watched as she wrinkled her nose herself. Handing her slip to the teacher she said something to him. "Mike? Will you take Amanda to her locker?" Sighing I pushed my self out of my seat. I walked over to her forcing a smile on my face.