Genre Fiction. Page - 606
This is just one version of this story that I've started. I am slowly working on this piece and am thinking about putting a price on this book when I'm finished. However, in order to finish this, I would like some feedback concerning whether or not you like what I have so far, what might need to be changed, and whether or not you be willing to pay in order to read the finished copy of the book. For now though this is just the demo version of the story.
A secret meeting. A secret mission. Lies a mile long. A life of shadows and cover ups. It's a life that Nicole has no idea she's a part of until she is forced into the middle of it. With a million questions swirling around her mind, she is confused, disoriented, and unsure of what is really going on. Can she escape the lies and coverups, or will she drown in her reality?
Following the death of his Father, Caleb travels to the United States to pick up his sister, Bree, to take her back to England for the reading of the will. Along the way, their plane malfunctions, forcing Caleb, Bree, and their pilot Milo, to abandon the plane.
Luckily, they land on an island and begin to work together to find a way off the island. They travel deeper into the jungle, attempting to find water, when they become ambushed by the island's strange inhabitants.
The three become separated and trapped in a war between three opposing forces, with the natives who aren't completely...human. Worse yet, they begin to develop strange powers, including incredible muscle memory and the ability to rapidly heal injuries. As a result, their captors believe them to be Gods, and drag them into their conflicts. Together, they must convince the inhabitants that they are immortal, and escape the island alive.
I'm no good at these things.. Um... This is a story about a girl who's been shunned/ridiculed all her life and her half sister who's gone through the same things because of mistakes their parental units make... You have to read it to understand, and I promise to redo this summary and make it better. But you should check this story out..