Genre Romance. Page - 203
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
This book is about a girl named Parvaani who lives in Mumbai. she is an adopted daighter who is hated by her family because she is fair and not a doctor or a nurse but has the dreams to become a dancer. Her neigborhood laughs at her but she soon meets someone who can help her to achieve her dream but can she do it?
At a young age Gillian had no illusions about her looks for her older brother John made a point to tell her, giving her the nickname Ugly Duckling. She was the daughter of one of England's best swordsmen, Philp de Page, Earl of Kilraven.
When he was younger he was taught women were a weakness and battle was the way of a man's life. Kendrick de Dare was the only son of England's most feared 'warlock' and warrior, Devil de Dare, Duke of Arundel.
Together they will find out the true meaning of happiness. Whether it be with swords, fists, words, or passion.
The Dragon People were the care takers of the world. Along side their dragons, they traveled the world. Seeking evil, but only to destroy it. Since the beginning of time that is what they have done. Until the day of the accident. They lost their most powerful dragon rider to the evil. The story of how it happened is unclear. But because of the accident, things have gone down hill. Now the evil is to the point were it has eaten its way into people's hearts. They have slowly stopped believing in the Dragon People. In return, they have retreated to the deepest darkest parts of the earth, waiting for the day when their Dragon Rider returns.
The novel of a nightmare within a dream is about two people having the same nightmare at the same time but they have never met before! Marline is an ambitious journalist who is working on a book. She received a call from her sister " Mila " who was living in Ohio with her roommate who left to LA . She wanted her sister to come visit her in her place. Mila turned to be the girl friend of the same guy whom Marline was dreaming about. Let's see what is gonna win LOVE Or sister Hood!
ps: NOT Finished yet! I'm working on it! tell me what do you think so far!?
Haunted by a Poem...
The words swirl and dance in her mind until Ella Montclair is forced to commit them to paper. The poem haunts her every night, the meaning of its words elusive. To keep her sanity she blocks the words from her mind.
An Unexpected Job Opportunity...
Ella can't believe her good fortune when she receives the job of a lifetime, research assistant to the great Lord Byron Thomas. As she is packing for her exciting journey, the poem that haunted her all those years ago resurfaces, leaving her to question fate. Why now? Why would the words resurface when she's about to embark on the greatest adventure of her life?
A Painting or a Portal...
Exploring Farnham Castle, her employer's latest research project, Ella finds an antique painting in one of the abandoned rooms. Compelled by an unseen force to touch the portrait, Ella is transported to the year 1888 and into the bedroom of Lord Wallace Hastings. Words of her poem begin to resurface as Ella struggles to find a way back to her time and the world she knows. Again, she questions their meaning. Will mere words haunting Ella from the past be her key back to her own time? What of the love she's begun to feel for the dashing Lord Hastings? Will the words of the poem that transported her Far Into Yesterday, bring her home again?