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Carson Vidalle knows all about love. She knows that love is perfect and never changes. But when a betrayal lands Carson at the bottom of the world, she doesn't know if she can love anyone anymore. But when Daniel, quarterback of the football team and one of Carson's closest friends, comes into the picture, Carson realises that love is in every step that she takes.
A modified tale of Little Red Riding Hood.
BLURB: Emily Redd is a monster hunter. One day she's taken by 'The Bite', a group of monsters that, together, want to take down the Ruler of the secret world. Will she get her life back? Or will she succumb to the darkness forever?
she has a been puched,kicked,thrown across rooms, but what happens when she moves in with her brother and all his friends fall for her, one friend a little harder then the others.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
This book is a diary of a misunderstood girl who changed herself based on events that followed her everyday life. It gives details of here steamy sex life, context of her personal thoughts and emotion in its rawest form!!
Who is the girl Jan met in the forest? Why does she only appear by moonlight? Who is the wolf who seeks to kill him?
elena the girl who was super hot, popular, had all the guys after her , caipton of the cheerleaders,grade A student. she has never feel in love until she meet ben.
ben the new guy in school super good looking,joined the football team,smart,nice and every girl had eyes on him but he only had eyes for elena.
I’m not the silly romantic person as you think. I don’t want the heavens or the shooting stars. I don’t want gemstones or gold. I have those things already. I want a steady hand. A kind soul. I want to fall asleep, and wake, knowing my heart is safe. I want to love, and be loved.
Carson Vidalle knows all about love. She knows that love is perfect and never changes. But when a betrayal lands Carson at the bottom of the world, she doesn't know if she can love anyone anymore. But when Daniel, quarterback of the football team and one of Carson's closest friends, comes into the picture, Carson realises that love is in every step that she takes.
A modified tale of Little Red Riding Hood.
BLURB: Emily Redd is a monster hunter. One day she's taken by 'The Bite', a group of monsters that, together, want to take down the Ruler of the secret world. Will she get her life back? Or will she succumb to the darkness forever?
she has a been puched,kicked,thrown across rooms, but what happens when she moves in with her brother and all his friends fall for her, one friend a little harder then the others.
Angeline felt special. She wanted him to be happy with her. She just wanted him to stay a bit longer. That's all. He obviously didn't want to stay, and now she's lost everyone around her because of what she's done. She tried to confide in someone, anyone really, but no one would listen. Then, along comes another guy.
Keagan is an average werewolf, a guy who really wouldn't mind having the Alpha title. Finding a mate, though, is the first step to getting there. The problem with that, is that not everyone finds their mate. He never actually even expected to do so. But he did find her, and she has some baggage to deal with, honestly. The only problem: she doesn't even trust him.
**Okay, so I haven't actually finished writing this story yet, and I'm really just kind of hoping for some feedback on the first couple of chapters. I have more, but I just want some critiques and comments and such, so if you could please give it a chance and let me know how the story is, and if it's even really worth continuing on with, that would be great. I'm not going to continue putting work into it if the story isn't even any good. Any comments at all, seriously throw them to me. Even if you don't like it at all, or if there isn't enough description, or if it doesn't make sense, or if there's too much description, or whatever.
Also, I've never really written in a guy's point of view, and I know that, from a reader's perspective, I enjoy having the two love interests' POV. If the switching of POV is too much or too often, or if the guy's POV is totally off or whatever, please tell me.
Thanks for reading all that crap above, and don't forget to comment the crap out of the book.
Kaitlyn-
This book is a diary of a misunderstood girl who changed herself based on events that followed her everyday life. It gives details of here steamy sex life, context of her personal thoughts and emotion in its rawest form!!
Who is the girl Jan met in the forest? Why does she only appear by moonlight? Who is the wolf who seeks to kill him?
elena the girl who was super hot, popular, had all the guys after her , caipton of the cheerleaders,grade A student. she has never feel in love until she meet ben.
ben the new guy in school super good looking,joined the football team,smart,nice and every girl had eyes on him but he only had eyes for elena.
I’m not the silly romantic person as you think. I don’t want the heavens or the shooting stars. I don’t want gemstones or gold. I have those things already. I want a steady hand. A kind soul. I want to fall asleep, and wake, knowing my heart is safe. I want to love, and be loved.